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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beats author with a limp noodle!!!! What was that! you tease!!! hehe, I\'m just playing. I like this chapter, he is having some hard times with his feelings, and it is natural that he would. Can\'t wait to read more perverted goodness! huggles
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
geez... you had me all ready for the sex scene and then left me hangin\'!! what\'s up with that?! update immediately... please. lol. they better get together, and soon!
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahhh!!! stop teasing me!!!! make them get it on already!!!!
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GAH! You\'re a tease! Where\'s the rest??? Love it! You have to finish this...I must know if they are actually gonna go through with getting it on or just tease each other to no end...
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent so far! I love being teased so I loved the teaser ending of chapter 1. lol I love incest as well, and this has plenty of promise. But to give a well rounded review, I did notice thcasicasional spelling mistake here and there. I don\'t beta for anyone, but if you ever feel like having someone beta your stories, then let me know. You obviously have some talent with story writing, so I hope you keep it up!
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo you sure are a tease. lol I love the build up, but I hope you deliver soon before I do myself an injury. lol Keep up the good work!
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep going
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great great story...i\'m so indugled into it. you can\'t just stop here, everything flows so smoothly you just have to continue please please continue
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
u stop, i\'ll scream. continue!! y\'d ya hav to stop dat scene???
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DO NOT STOP! PLEASE! Awesome story and I want to read more.