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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my god... out of the thousands of fanfiction I\'ve read, I\'ve only reviewed 3 stories, 2 other ones and this being my latest one. This story cantains enough details to spare the mind from thinking. I am and absolute big fan of incest, but this one is at it\'s best. Good job, and continue what your doing- It\'s doing great so far!
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May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is not badly written at all!
Give us and the little minx what she so craves, lol!
Do continue...
Nimue
Give us and the little minx what she so craves, lol!
Do continue...
Nimue
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May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update!!!
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it so much! and il ove the lil juicy parts you have in there! please continue the story! its OCKRA AWEYA OMESA!
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This a great fanfiction. Sure, the plot is definately racey, but the story is very insightful, and I would love for you to continue this. You rock! And I\'m hooked on this story!!
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April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good so far, continue
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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE IT! I don\'t appreciate these little cliff-hangers you leave! get them together in the dirtiest way possible! I want him to FUCK her like she\'s a street corner whore! PLEASE!! Just continue!
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Both chapters are amazing, good detail, great character development. I love it..Please, oh please make more..? lol you\'re an awesome writer.
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well I was all perverted with ya until....
I come for chapter two and it is nothing but a tease....
SHOT DOWN!!!!
Like Tina from her Nicky....
Good luck with chapter three...
Where is my pervert friend i meet a few days ago.... bring back the thoughts...
thanks
your
Pervy Pal!!!
I come for chapter two and it is nothing but a tease....
SHOT DOWN!!!!
Like Tina from her Nicky....
Good luck with chapter three...
Where is my pervert friend i meet a few days ago.... bring back the thoughts...
thanks
your
Pervy Pal!!!
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WELL YIPPEEEE!!!! he can come to my club anytime.... I would ride that cowboy!!!!!!!!!!!