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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mediocre story at best. Perhaps when you decide to update you'll bring it up to par?
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story shows great promise, it looks like its gonna be very good. So you had better continue with more chapters sharpish! :)
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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cow ^_^
oh you wanted constructive criticism? ok. MAKE THE CHAPTERS LONGER!!!!
oh you wanted constructive criticism? ok. MAKE THE CHAPTERS LONGER!!!!
schedule
May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So descriptive! Great story. Can\'t wait for the next chapter.
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AH! This took FOREVER to load. Gah.
Anyway. I LOVE VICTOR. I want me a man like that. -smack smack-
<3
Anyway. I LOVE VICTOR. I want me a man like that. -smack smack-
<3
schedule
April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ha! first to read and first to review! go me!