rate_review Reviews

I initially read this story as it was posted in 2004. I LOVE the revisions. I am so curious to know more about Reina's past- why she was targeted by the necromancer, what come of her mother and father's work together. And I am infatuated with Ky'Lien (sorry for misspelling)what exactly is she as a dark half-elf, how did she come to be discovered walking from the underworld, does she dream/remember any of it, what was the heart of the controversy surrounding her introduction into the new community, is she sexually sought after by many, trained in the arts of lovemaking? I look forward to new directions of this story!

One criticism is that sometimes it is hard to follow new terms as they are often introduced without explanation like the word you used to describe the dragon and the beings that he protects the community from, what is the story behind the "limp body" that he delivered to the school? Also, why did Reina's instructor believe that it was important that girls meet?

I cant wait for new developments!

I like the direction this story is going... also the plot is good.. i think its pretty organized and easy to follow so if you update ill keep on reading it :)

Hey, I think you\'ve got a really awesome story. I\'d really love for you to write more cuz i\'m eager to see what happens next. I\'ll post 10 more reviews if that\'s what it takes for me to hear more from you.
Love and Peace.

update soon!!!!!!!!! your story seems interesting, but you have to put more smut scenes

I love this story, please update it! I want more about Garhein!

Great story, please update soon!