rate_review Reviews

I have to tell you that i absoulutly love your story. I read all 14 chapters in one night and you leave me wanting for more! Update soon and know that you might have quite a few fans!

Love the plot development. Really well written. I can\'t wait for the next chapter!!

YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!!! THIS STORY IS TOO GOOD TO LEAVE IT ALONE!! WILL BE WAITING FOR A NEW CHAPTER!!

YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!!! THIS STORY IS TOO GOOD TO LEAVE IT ALONE!! WILL BE WAITING FOR A NEW CHAPTER!!

I like the story... it's imaginative, good, creative... and (sadly) one of the few with good grammar and spelling :P
please keep writing... you've got me hooked

UPDATE QUICKLY!! WILL BETINGTING FOR MORE>>> LOVED WHEN THEY KISSES>>> IT WAS SO CUTE!!

wow! i love this story! thank you, thank you for sharing it with us! im looking forward to what happens next! more Saxon/Nydia goodness!!^^ they seem so cute together (not to mention right) but you have made a very powerful and evil villain it would seem >.< guthrie is EVIL!! (in all it's capitalised evilness... :P) i'm also guessing that he's the fire essence, since fire seems to run with his rage.... and i'm also guessing that he is the "fire" in the prophecy? anyways! i really really enjoyed this story!~ please please udpate soon! i'm looking forward to the next chapter!!!

~Shinigami Clara

This is partly on the story, and partly on seperate chapters- first of all, I enjoyed the story a lot. But..I'm not quite sure I agree with nearly his entire history in one part. It took the flow out of the novel, because know we know both character's pasts, and nothing happened beforehand to trigger reactions, or painfull memories or clips. In the end, the readers should be able to piece together the knowledge of each character's history from the sequence of events in the story. The dream the hae had in...11, I think? was a little too long [this is all in my opinion] and the rest of the story seemed almost dulled, now that the suspense of the past was gone. However, the story continues to hold my interest and I think it is a wonderful piece of work; well thought out and well written, with good character growth.

excellent intro chapter! I just want to slap Nydia\'s mother so bad.. can I please?? =)

Awesome! She just ran away from the lecherous Frogman... *dun dun dun*!
I loved your description of the little boy Basil.. his chest puffing up at the request.. =) too cute!
onto next chapter..