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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*tilts her head and looks confused*
This story was finished, wasn\'t it?? I was already jumping up and down to see an update and didn\'t look further than the word \'Clean\' . Imaging my surprise when I started with chapter 19, only to realize that this wasn\'t \'Clean cut\'! (the one I have been waiting for)
Oh well, I\'ll take this chance to say the I loved \'Clean sweep\' and that I would very much like and update for the equally enjoyable \'Clean cut\'. Now, wasn\'t that nicely asked :)
This story was finished, wasn\'t it?? I was already jumping up and down to see an update and didn\'t look further than the word \'Clean\' . Imaging my surprise when I started with chapter 19, only to realize that this wasn\'t \'Clean cut\'! (the one I have been waiting for)
Oh well, I\'ll take this chance to say the I loved \'Clean sweep\' and that I would very much like and update for the equally enjoyable \'Clean cut\'. Now, wasn\'t that nicely asked :)
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Pros: Very engaging story. I was so hooked by the characters that I read it all in one sitting. Trenton\'s maturation unfolded believably. What a charming character! My heart broke for him after he suffered at the hands of those self-serving monsters. When Clive showed up, I was almost as happy as Trenton was. I wouldn\'t have minded a bit more aggressive vengeance, though.
Cons: I liked that Trenton had someone to talk to when he came back home, but naming the character after the author was VERY distracting. Until then, I had been lost in the story. There are a few spelling errors and a few instances of missing punctuation scattered thoughout the story.
Questions: Are there chapters missing? It goes from chapter 4 to chapter 7 and the jump to Trenton being in France seems abrupt to me.
Overall, I enjoyed the story and plan to read its sequel.
Cons: I liked that Trenton had someone to talk to when he came back home, but naming the character after the author was VERY distracting. Until then, I had been lost in the story. There are a few spelling errors and a few instances of missing punctuation scattered thoughout the story.
Questions: Are there chapters missing? It goes from chapter 4 to chapter 7 and the jump to Trenton being in France seems abrupt to me.
Overall, I enjoyed the story and plan to read its sequel.
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October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading Clean Cut. I am waiting impatiently for the rest of the story, but like all thing wonderful and believe you hat hat was nothing short of pure bliss, it take time. *pout* I haven\'t finished reading Clean Sweep but trust me I will be done in a day. Oh, thank you. *bows and humbly awaits for more...stories*
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, after reading The Dreams of a Dom I got hooked on these two. I thi this story... it is so heartbreaking at points, and yet so sweet that I had a major \"awww\" fit at the end... bravo. Very, very bravo.
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January 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! I really enjoyed reading it. You've got great distinctive characterion ion for Clive and Trent, great detail, and I got really drawn into not only the stort tht the charaters as well. The only problem is...is that I WANT MORE! I would really love to read about Clive and Trent years down the road. Is this possible? Please?
Cassandra
Cassandra
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October 16, 2002 at 12:00 AM
I\'m enjoying this story so far - Great characters! I especially liked the description of Clive \"flowing\" up to the front.