rate_review Reviews

I love your story. Your writing is straight, clear and pointing the most important. The characters are charming and nice. I've loved reading this story, am delighted to have the sequel to read yet !

Thank you for your story !

A french mother and reader,
Bonne année et bonne santé !

Merely Truth

Ah, the joys of online translators... ^_~ Several of your french sentences need correcting, but other than that (and a few other general grammar/spelling errors), this fic was wonderful! Very creative and engaging -- loved the complex characters and details!! I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future... keep up the good work!!

Ok so maybe I read them backwards but it didn\'t take anything away from the first. It was excellent, I envy your talent and I must admit I think you\'ve turned me into...how do you say, a \"fan girl\" ? Is that right? I vowed it would never happen but, what the hell. Annnd, \"stud muffinlette\" is now a welcome addition to my vocabulary.

This story and its sequel have always been a big favorite of mine. Your storytelling is vivid, imaginative and energetic, and I\'m completely in love with Trenton and Clive. Are you considering writing more stories featuring them? I would so love an entire series dedicated to these two characters! Please consider writing further adventures of these compelling characters. There aren\'t many original stories on the internet that capture me the way these have.

i love your work. this story was no different in that regard. i enjoyed every word of it. and i thought it was really cool the way you put yourself in there at the end. you are so cool, Scribe! i\'m going to find the Scrib Fanclub. and if tere isn\'t one, i\'m going to start it!

I am too lazy to finsd the last chapter of the sequel, so I'll jusyt review ait all here...

utterly blloody brilliant. I have read booth this and the sequel several times now, and I must say that each time makes me love these stories even more. Your characterization is just fab, and believe me when I say that the smut and the UST is way off the scale....

Next time you pop into the DC verse, give Clive a hug from me? I am SO ideyingying with him right now, since I am lusting after a jailbait who' in another countryy and am encouraging her to experiment with her own age group.... *sigh*

You rock. I am pretty sure that without your fabulous stories, especially this and the sequel, my nano would have flopped before it got started... because of reading this story, I managed to get the... untandtanding I bneeded to write my stuopid quantity-over-quality smutty thingy that evryone seems to lose patioence with...

This rocks, and I mean it.

By the way, CLive can makke people behave transdimensionally... it's because of him tha I bought a swimming cap and started hauling a bottle of conditioner to the pool :P

Very nice with a sweet ending. Trenton is cool, the kind of guy I usually get a crush on. Is it weird that your characters end up reminding me of my fri? A? As my friend L is want to quote \"its not good sex unless theirs blood on the ceiling.\" It was a nice story, and I liked it. Although it does make you wonder how much is real life, but such is life. No one ever gets all their questions answered. Around chapter three or four, the scene where Trenton and Clive have that discussion at the restuarant, its accidently attactched to the chapter before. Very good. Now if you\'ll excus... ... *purchases base ball bat and plance ticket to france to attacka fictional character*

I adore this series. I\'ve read Clean Sweep, Clean Cut, and the Dream\'s of the Dom series several times and they never get old. Did you know there is Clive the leather hairdresser fanfiction here at AdultFanFiction? Also Clean Sweep is missing a chapter; I think it\'s called \"Reluctant Agressor.\" Or something like that. That\'s all i had to say. Great job!

Hi Scribe!

Thank you again for your email!!! I can\'t tell you how happy you made me by answering my review.

And the two additional they are new) parts are great!!! (Before it was a bit strange - the talk in the kitchen of a restaurant and then, suddenly, Trenton is in *Paris*? And no one ever asked you before if there is something missing??? That is even more strange... - Because I\'m sure there are a lot of people who love your stories)

Especially this chapter... Even if nothing really happens (naturally), I *love* Clive when he becomes... more \'dommish\' as Trenton would call it *ggg*. He is dangerous and not dangerous at the same time... And especially part V makes that even more clear than every other part of CS or CC (I think).

At first I wanted to state the lines I like most in this review. But then it became clear to me that this chapter is most likely my favourite one now - and there are simply too many *favourite lines*... The entire situation between Clive and Trenton is *hot*... Hotter than even the most discriptive sex-scenes...

THANK YOU!!!

Yours

Mogli the Witch

I love it. I really enjoyed reading it. Very well written, keep it up =^^=