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May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was AMAZING!
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I didn\'t get to finish your story because I came half way through, what I read was really good though. No need for a sequel. Well done.
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was the best ever, u sure your not bi, because that was good, no great...more!!!
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been passing by, reading stories that have an interesting little blurb. I saw yours about.. 5 times before I actually read it. And what can I say? Oh, it was beautiful, and of course amazing, and... arousing. You should keep writing slash, even if you\'re not gay/bi. You\'re a very talented writer. :)
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April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I love yaoi, slash, gayness, whatever you call it, I love reading and watching it. Anywho, this was good for a first time story and if you are male then I wouldn\'t be surprised if you are a little bi. It was a big unrealistic in their ages, however, and I doubt that \"love\" could blossom from an encounter like this one. Otherwise, it waod. od.
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story. i loved how he was so open and the lemon was great. you should do more...i\'d love to read them if you do....great work
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ummm, I don\'t know why, but I always have the best orgasms reading about M/M even though I\'m a lesbian. I just came really hard reading that (and touching myself obviously). Thank you for your help!
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
me like, me like alot. I hope you desied to add some more. But eather way, I like it. Good job.
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very well done, i appreciate the mix sensitivity and raw sexuality you brought to the story
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a great story, one of the best m/m stories I read. The emotion was the thing that made this story so interasting. Keep up the good work lad! =^.^=