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for Hotel Love

by Melrick

person harryhollow
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I am a girl that is sick and twisted cause I think two males fucking each other is well it turns me on and I me it really really does *giggles* I can\'t wait to read more of your stories I think you are a wonderful write and hope to get *giggles* to read more!!
person DPuppy
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good. Sweet, and a lil hot.
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Did you pull Steven Jones out of your ass,or something. anyway if you up date i\'ll tell you why I said that
person Iras
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are now my favorite author on aff ever! And you didn\'t even do anything Yugioh related!
person SuT
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I applaude your first attempt at gay porn and hope you can bring yourself to do more. You don\'t need ot be gay to dig it...hell, I\'m a 32 year old mom, and it\'s all I seem to write...of course I specialize in gay anime porn...

I look forward to reading some of your other work.
person Anon
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. good job.
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHOA. That had to be one of the hottest m/m fics I have ever read. You have captured the spirit of guy-on-guy loving perfectly; that sense of wonder/enrapturement, of first-time insecurity, the physicality of the whole thing. Your characters were very realistic, anat mat made the story that much more believable and sexy. (And I still can't believe that you're just bi-curious >D.) In other words, this thing should be published. Definitely adding to favorites.
person Baradiel
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That. Was. Too. Cute! That'd be awsome if you continued this story, I loved it!
person DarkRain
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey this was great, you have great talent. You should make more stories like this. Awesome job. Adio.
person Rachael
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
write more i want to know what happens next