rate_review Reviews

Young love is always adorable.

Not bad at all for an attempt at male/male smut. I rather enjoyed it, and it was far better than my own writing. Well done. You are an extremely good writer.

I loved it. Pure porn and boy love to boot. For your first and only BL story, you've done a fantastic job. I like the hesitancy and then the excitement. I can totally see two young teens experimenting in such a fashion. I wish you'd write more of this genre, but understand that it's not your cup of tea. Still thanks for sharing this one.

~mab

DAMN!!! That was a really good story it made me hot.

(whistles) Nice work! I likies! And you're an Aussie too! I've read another one of your stories and to tell you the truth...they're HOT! XD

That was a very sweet story, but I'm not sure they could possibly love each other after just meeting. I mean, sure I've felt very strongly about someone after a night with them, but I had known him for a very long time before he became a romantic interest. I hadn't just seen him around. I don't know, I guess love is a pretty serious subject to me, so that part was a little distracting, otherwise I thought it was a very cute story. Fairly realistic, except the whole... "I've never thought of a boy that way except i'll let him fuck me" was a little weird. I would have let steve been the top, but it worked either way i guess. I liked it!

For someone who wrote male slash that was really erotic although you did forget the preparation, anal sex without prep and lube would be painful unless the person is used to being fucked raw. Thats the only thing that wasnt realistic but hell it didnt even matter, it was still hot

Btw I am a girl who just reads a lot of slash thats why I know these things

This was adorable! I loved it. Buht I personally think that the whole 'I love you, I love you too' thing is a bit cliche, buht it worked for your story. You should write more boy/boy stories. You may not think it's your forte buht this is a great story.
Keep up the work!
<3 Nina.

Although I don't usually go for underage sex (I do have a couple of kids I would probably tan their hides if they did it), but I really liked this one. As far as M/M goes this one ranks up there with some of the best. I almost exclusively write M/M and you did a wonderful job. I honestly can't believe this was your first attempt. Wonderful.

Hello. I really loved that story, it was really good. I hope you add something more.