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for Burning Up

by LadyPhoenixRaine

person Mia
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whoa. that was good. you should keep next chapter M/F also. i like these two paired together. nice first two chapters
person Anon
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey gurl!!! woo woo! hot n sexy! lol.. great job!!

guess who.....
person cosmoz
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wat..wat...where is the rest? Oohhh..so hot, keep going. GOD how i wish this would come true for me
person ruth
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...loved it. I felt like i was there watching him too. -And her. I can\'t wait to read more about these two neighbors. Wouldn\'t it be interesting if we all had neighbors like this? Home is where the heart is. (Will look for more)
person Liquid Skin
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic!!!!!!! I wanna see both of them together in the same room for the next chapter!!! This is sooo HOT!!!!!!!
person Lynn
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. good detail, nice thought process and very imaginative. they definitely HAVE to meet. maybe throw in one of her girlfriends. She should not tell her b/f. loved it. please continue.