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oh...pllleeeaaaseeeee...continue.......MORE!!!MORE!!MORE!!!HORNY!!
i want to hear tina scream with ecstacy while she was fucking...ooohhhhhh pleeeasss..

Ooh... this chapter\'s GOOD.

Hope you find inspiration to write more! I really love this fic!

Try watching some porn or sumthin... might help ^_^

This was again very nicely written. I felt that the second chapter lacked a little something that the third offered, and that would be more plot. Including Jenny in this as an outsider becoming an insider was a pretty good idea, but I\'d like to no where this is going to go. And you also foreshadowed that Tina\'s doctor likes her. I thought you would follow that up but now you\'re saying you may not write another chapter unless inspiration takes you.
Oh well, good details in the sexual parts, nice choice of words, good of of original ideas during the sex scenes. However, sometimes you repeat a word too many times, such as \"hard\", in a row. But that can easily be remedied and is hard to pick up if no one else is proof-reading your story. Other than that, good job.

If there\'s still more he wants to do that sweet young thing, he better do it! He\'s got 5 days before her prickass parents come home, they better be fucking 24/7!

My bad, didn\'t see the other chapters till just now. How I love fucking in the water... >:) What if Tony invites a guy friend over, and they all have a threesome? aff.net needs a shitload more m/m/f. One takes her womanhood, and the other tales her mouth as ride the love train, YEAH!!

YOU HAVE TO KEEP GOING!!! hav have so much talent and this story is really great! I really want to know what happens when Tina\'s parents get home too.

Hey i think this fic is amazin u have to write more!! i mean this is the best fic i have ever read!
It would be good if Jenny really got into it and stayed over all night ;) lol
You are very talented (least i think so) so keep up the good work hunni
xlx_Luv Me_xlx

i just wanna say, i really really really liked the first two chapters of the story. i know when i was tina\'s age i always had tons of fantasies about older guys, and the way you wrote the first two chapters was way cool and awesome. but the last chapter was kinda dull. i dont have a problem with the \'rape\', cause in this story it really wasnt; and even if it was a really violent rape, i dont think i would be put off by that either, at least to read the chapter.
anyways, the thing i thought was stupid about chapter 3 was tony and tina\'s logic about jennie. if you wanted to get a threesome, you could have gone another way. how is jennonnaonna keep a secret of her having sex with a 30 year old, but she wouldnt be able to keep a secret of her friend having sex with a 30 year old. i dont get it. if tony wanted to have sex with jennie, the way it was written was lame.
hey i know all some people care about is the sex, and would tell me i shouldnt nag or complain, but you actually wrote the first 2 chapters pretty well, and it was a nice story, but i kinda think chapter 3 was detrimental to to entire story. but its your story, and i cant wait to read the next chapter.
so, if you want an honest review, here\'s one. i hope there\'s not more with jennie, cause i like the tony/tina combo better.
i hope you arent angered by my opinion, but i also hope you update soon, cause i wanna see where this story goes.
~me

I LOVED this!!! So good! The best Ive seen

This story is very good...a rather taboo subject, but still very good...Please, update soon...