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for Blue Eyes Crying

by girlnextdoor

person celestial_being
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was simply amazing. I have to say you captured the aura, the intensity and the heightened passion so extremely well. Your writing skills, your fluidity and your eloquence seamed together this truly, truly breathtaking piece. This had so much emotion, and I commend you on a superb effort.

Continue writing please, you have immense talent and this is the BEST piece of original fiction I have read in so long, and my standards are incredibly high.

Thankyou so much for this- it was excellent.
person My real name is Amy but heres my penname on this site Mistress Har¨ò
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Wow great story so far I love it alot. I too just post my own story the same time you did and I thought i should read yours and review it. I love it alot. I love the lust, the betialed, the longer of another, the love triangle.l...wonderful..wonderful. And please read and review mine...