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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i\'d ry bey be grateful for reviews of this, as the two chapters that i\'ve posted are the first lesbian, and rapes that i\'ve written, so please feel free to give constrcutive critism
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for your reviews guys, I\'m making chapters longer, and i should have more by the end of the day (hopefully 2 mid length chapters!) but I\'ve been told one is quite powerful
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhh it has a storyline. i was looking for pwp. this looks promising, tho . . . if you could just make the chapters a wee bit longer, maybe?
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good as usual, not typical for her style of writing as I read a lot of this writers stories. Exploring new ideas and ways of writing, keep going. 5*****
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You writing is really good at sustaining the readers attention... it also draws me in, like i wanna know how they ended up homeless, what theyre gonna do in manchester etc. Well done, can\'t wait for next part!
holz x
holz x