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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really really liked this one.
It\'s very touching and good written. I couldn\'t stop reading it.
I hope you will continue soon. I would like to know, how the relationship between these two will continue.
And which role will Ford play?
Keep going
-LinLin
It\'s very touching and good written. I couldn\'t stop reading it.
I hope you will continue soon. I would like to know, how the relationship between these two will continue.
And which role will Ford play?
Keep going
-LinLin
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May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
i need to knew what is going to happen to harry why just because
because i will review until u do ( every day)
i need to knew what is going to happen to harry why just because
because i will review until u do ( every day)
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the two new chapters!
so the plants actually do that so they could reproudce at the expense of another creature\'s painful death? Yikes!! gald they got to it in time. :-s
Heh.. and I guess I was wrong with the new ambassor being spock-like... he\'s more angry and emtional-like.
And does Harry fully kwhatwhat happened to himself...? Because it seems as if he\'s still thinking that our main guy here peratated him in his sleep... and still acting as if he raped him.
dunno, that was just how I read it.
of course, harry could be just be still shakenup from the aftereffects of that horrid plant.
Anyway, I hope Harry and The \"Hero\" of the story will at least be happy together in the future. maybe a warm, fuzzy chapter decated to the new ambassor, and harry learning that the human race isn\'t as bloodthirsty and so on forth as they think...
that there are many good sides to us humans.. like with our favortive main guy!
and more on the details of the planet and the intari itself.. I like what you came up with them so far.
so the plants actually do that so they could reproudce at the expense of another creature\'s painful death? Yikes!! gald they got to it in time. :-s
Heh.. and I guess I was wrong with the new ambassor being spock-like... he\'s more angry and emtional-like.
And does Harry fully kwhatwhat happened to himself...? Because it seems as if he\'s still thinking that our main guy here peratated him in his sleep... and still acting as if he raped him.
dunno, that was just how I read it.
of course, harry could be just be still shakenup from the aftereffects of that horrid plant.
Anyway, I hope Harry and The \"Hero\" of the story will at least be happy together in the future. maybe a warm, fuzzy chapter decated to the new ambassor, and harry learning that the human race isn\'t as bloodthirsty and so on forth as they think...
that there are many good sides to us humans.. like with our favortive main guy!
and more on the details of the planet and the intari itself.. I like what you came up with them so far.
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You do know part 4 doesn\'t come up don\'t you?I love the storie and would really appreaciate i t if you sent it to me. Sorry if any thing is misspelled my cat is attacking my typing hand.
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April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty good... very intersting.
I\'d like there to be more devlopments in the inteactions and character devlopment between Harry and that man. :)
Ford made me think of spock for some reason... werid, huh? Naybe it was the formal and stiff way he did things...
I\'d like there to be more devlopments in the inteactions and character devlopment between Harry and that man. :)
Ford made me think of spock for some reason... werid, huh? Naybe it was the formal and stiff way he did things...
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(rubs eyes) *_* Lovely story hun, but please make the printing smaller next time. ^_^;;; My eyes are all dizzy now. X)
I really liked the story though. I have this thing for boys being molested by monsters and other weird things. >D
Nice story, write another one some time. ^_^
I really liked the story though. I have this thing for boys being molested by monsters and other weird things. >D
Nice story, write another one some time. ^_^
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was very intersting! write more.. :-D
please?
please?