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for Forever Mine

by Toby7

person Viesta
schedule August 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like the direction this story is going. If you still need a beta, I'll volunteer. I'm savvy with writing, and I want to see where this is going.
person wolfluv
schedule April 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
AWE that was sooo cute! I wonder why things didn't work out for them? ANYWHO I look forward to reading more when you get the chance! read ya laters!
person peeps
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. please continue
person luna
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cute but if there vamps how can they be out at day light?
person silent angel
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! ive never been to this part of aff before and this is the first story i read and i really like it cant wait to see what happends next
person Mrae Rae
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^ its a lovely story those guys ar sooo sweet!
person lacy
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so what\'s going to happen? when are you going to put the next chapter up?
person bunnicle
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it! can\'t wait to see chapter 2!
person Kage
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it. You must keep going. *smiles* I look forward to the next part.
person bunnicle
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
interesting turn around. can\'t wait to see what you do in the next chapter