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January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You don\'t fall in love with someone because they\'re a good fuck. Storm and Michael have barely said two words to each other, so how can they be \"hopelessly in love\"?
Otherwise, this fic\'s okay.
Otherwise, this fic\'s okay.
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January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for all the feedback. This is my first story, so it\'s all welcome!
To anon: Remember Jack and Rose in Titanic? They barely said two words to each other before falling in love, and that movie won eleven oscars! The suggestion is that Storm and Michael fall in love after spending several days and nights with each other, after the night described.
To anon: Remember Jack and Rose in Titanic? They barely said two words to each other before falling in love, and that movie won eleven oscars! The suggestion is that Storm and Michael fall in love after spending several days and nights with each other, after the night described.
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January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thats rediculus (so is my spelling haha...) anyways you made him die didnt you. aww thats so sad...well now the story sucks
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Twisted and hot.
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May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent beginning!
I also got an Original Erotica/Sex story called \"Midnight Rape\"
I hope you\'ll review it.
Well, off for me to read the other chapters!
JohnSlayer
I also got an Original Erotica/Sex story called \"Midnight Rape\"
I hope you\'ll review it.
Well, off for me to read the other chapters!
JohnSlayer
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May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehehehe! Every girl fan\'s dream! LOL
Love it!
Keep up the good work!
JohnSlayer
Love it!
Keep up the good work!
JohnSlayer
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May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3: OH OH! BUSTED! Lol
Very good chapter!
Very good chapter!
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May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its quite confusing right now. I mean chp 10 was a week later than chp 11 was still at the hockey rink. Its good but confusing but GOOD!
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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE FAST!!! I WANT TO KNOW!!!!
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
holy crap! i can\'t believe i only read this now. please post the next part soon. i don\'t have any suggestions because everything is good so far.