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for What got into her

by NicholasGhost

person swiss miss
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what DID get into her? lol. i liked it. short and sweet.
person foxfox
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the sex scene was waaaaaaaay too short. Lots of description about the chocolate sauce (good - made me hungry! For chocolate, not a cock...) and the oral was pretty good. Sex scene was almost non existant. just expand on that and it would have been good because it\'s quite well written. Much more well written then some that I\'ve seen!