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August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please write more! I really like the story so if you don't update soon, I will be forced to hunt down your muse with my army of minion-friends carring torches and pichforks. 0_x Haha. Anyway, nice going. One thing though. Maybe find bodybody to check for spelling and grammer errors. It kinda bugged me while I was reading it. It's a unique story though which gets brownie points from me! yum... brownies. =3
As far as the story goes, I think there should definately be more Brian drama to come. Funness. ^_^
As far as the story goes, I think there should definately be more Brian drama to come. Funness. ^_^
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Poor Adonis. I hope his pants weren't really ripped *pouts* But Brian really has gone to far this time. Maybe some sort of accident should happen *imagines one of the stone gargoyles falling on top of Brian, thus crushing and killing him* Hehehehe
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, Poor Brian *gets out the first Aid Kit and scowls at Brian* That ruffian shouldn't get away with it this time. I look forward to what happens next.
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::review for ch.10::
Eep! Please let Axel get there in time to kick Brian\'s ass!! Poor Adonis, lil\' red head cutie in trouble with the boys, lol. ^_^ Can\'t wait for another chapter! CONTINUE or I\'ll whine like a lil\' fangirl... And nobody likes whiny fangirls. >_<
-Kite
Eep! Please let Axel get there in time to kick Brian\'s ass!! Poor Adonis, lil\' red head cutie in trouble with the boys, lol. ^_^ Can\'t wait for another chapter! CONTINUE or I\'ll whine like a lil\' fangirl... And nobody likes whiny fangirls. >_<
-Kite
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July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*snorts* The ending comment sceen was great! But you didn\'t explain Donkey Years!!!! EXPLAIN EY YEY YEARS!!!!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE !!!!!!!!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE !!!!!!!!
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July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!! Poor Adonis!!!!
Get off of him Brian *cracks Brian over the head with Sceptre*
Please update soon! Axel has to be the hero and save Adonis!!!!
Get off of him Brian *cracks Brian over the head with Sceptre*
Please update soon! Axel has to be the hero and save Adonis!!!!
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ack!!!!! A cliffieee nooooo!!! I don\'t want Adonis to be taken by Brian, it would be pointless for Axel to go through the trouble of talking to that boy who hated Brian too and then not get to the club in time. Please don\'t let their newly forming relatoinship be tainted even more by Brian and his crazy ass antics!! I\'ll still read it anyway, but that\'s my opinion. *teehee* I can\'t wait to read more!
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah well its better than nothing ^_^; I hope your muse gets back because I like the plot!
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woah! Sweet ass dream.
I will never know the joy of being a sibling for I have none *sighs*
But form I\'ve seen of others, maybe I\'m better off more than naught.
Well, I\'m loving the story thus far and can\'t wait to see what happens next
WRITE MORE SOON
I will never know the joy of being a sibling for I have none *sighs*
But form I\'ve seen of others, maybe I\'m better off more than naught.
Well, I\'m loving the story thus far and can\'t wait to see what happens next
WRITE MORE SOON
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Aurora *pats head and passes author a cup of peppermint tea*
I\'m sorry to hear about your coimputer woes, but I\'m glad you\'re back online and connected with the world again
I was hihgly pleased with chapter 8 and i look forward to chpt 9
As your princess, I COMMAND YOU TO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER
I\'m sorry to hear about your coimputer woes, but I\'m glad you\'re back online and connected with the world again
I was hihgly pleased with chapter 8 and i look forward to chpt 9
As your princess, I COMMAND YOU TO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER