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for More Than You've Ever Seen

by AEMorgan

person Gundie
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I usually don't partake in the reading of Original Fiction, but.

Your story right here makes me happy that I did.

Immensely happy.

I love the way you started it out, and the ending was superb. There were details, but not too many, and you garnished it just right. I swear I'm swooning.

The only thing wrong with this is that you didn't write more. XD
person Ladyhawke
schedule June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story.