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for The Girl Next Door

by Dominique

person Anon
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Des
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yo this story is the bomb B. Keep writing and updating...I am totally hooked dawg!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey love the story, keep up the good work ^_^
person me
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! hurry up and update soon!
person Kim
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! I think she should definatly \"get together\" with Jason, but then let Alex talk her into forgiving him the next day, until he does something really stupied later on. This story could denfinatly continue for many chapters to come! But thats just what I think, its just an idea. Hope you dont mind, but I am adding this to my Recomended Reading list.
person natalie
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay so i\'ve definately been waiting for you to update this story for like 2 months now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i\'m waiting for the good part!! hurry already....
person Wyvern
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, love your story so far, but to be perfectly honest I don\'t think Ronnie should have Jay now, she should suffer a lil, the shoe should be on the other foot now, another girl perhaps?
lol just a suggestion anyways great story & good luck
person scarlet
schedule May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story! i hope your update soon!
person Naomi
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg! you need to update quick! i love this story! your a good writer....just need to update more every now and then!
person Anon
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you know at first i have to admit, i wasn\'t very interested in this story, but now that you have it going i like it. there are a few spelling errors and you might want to fix those, but otherwise it\'s good. *licks fingers* two very wet thumbs up!!