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for The Girl Next Door

by Dominique

person sourgirl
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
they finally admitted that they love each other .. yay! can\'t wait to see what you come up with later! :D
person Anon
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MUST UPDATE SOONER! please? umm, if i give you... a cherry? will you do it for a cherry?
person effie
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
u better post jan. 1st, 2005!!! i luv this story, and am so happy u started posting again! chapter 17 please!
person Liza
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Serves her right, damn it! poor Jason! argh :/
*cries* Marines eh? wow.
I hope he meets another girl rofl, Ronnie is just... mean!!! YEA!
*gets overdramatic* It\'s so true what they say:
You never know what you have until it\'s gone.

keep going. I am looking forward to 2005 and a new chapter.
person SIN
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its the bestore i have read in a long time it its a litel like mi life but mi ending was not what i expected hope that theres is better then mains waiting for update on your story ......^_^
person pookie
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
tissues please. I really really thought that he had faked her out and didn\'t leave. Happy holidays and happy writing new chapters. Keep up the fantastic writing.
person Liza
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. I hate how she treats Jason. And that ( just because what happened between them ) he isn\'t allowed to have a girl in his life. That isn\'t her. While she is allowed to be with his asshole of a brother, Alex. I sooo wanna kick her butt rofl.
See how rowed up you get me? hahah, I love it. So many emotions, you had me laughing, almost screaming, lifting my eyebrows and gasp in shock.
Please continue :)

Lizzy
person pookie
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. You\'re a very talented writer, keep up the good work!
person childofdark
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey. i really liked your story. i rarely review stories i read but i had to tell you that i give you major props for writing this. loving it! you MUST update soon! keep up the great work. this is HOT HOT HOT!
person laci
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES! about time! i was waiting for my favorite story to come back! i love it