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for The Girl Next Door

by Dominique

person Anon
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really hope that the two of them get back together, They are so right for each other.
person Itsa Riddle
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE DAMNIT!!!!!
...please...
lol

Itsa Riddle
person Storyteller11
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy shit tis is a great story
person Theresa
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good good good UPDATE SOON I NEED MORE It cant stop here its to sad JASON U FOOL!!! i had a boyfreind named Jason and he was almost identical to this Jason it didnt last tho sadly dumb shit we both were to much alike are tempers just clashed to much fight not enough loving but it was fun alot of the time ;-) anyway update soon plz
person KC
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I LOVE this story! It made me feel everything! I almost cried at some parts and I was laughing and smiling during the cute parts. I was angry and peeved at some parts and irritated and scowling at others. I LOVE this story!! Please continue writing it! I want to know what will happen between Jason and Veronica. Please send me a email when you write another chapter! Thank you for reading my email


Please keep writing!

-KC
person Brianna
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO!!!! you cant leave them like that! its so unfair and so sad.... why\'d you have to make alex so evil?!?! jason and veronica were just starting to get a good thing going there :( i hope that they get back together again or im gonna cry. Any-who keep writting, its very good :)
person Jess
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope Jason rings Alex\'s neck when he realizes Alex lied, and I hope there\'s some major lemon coming up when Jason and Veronica reunite, lol, if they ever do *crosses fingers*
person Lizzy
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOw, I cannot believe it! He actually fell for Alex lies?!!!! omg!
I thought he knew what Alex was all about!
Un freaking real.

more please. lizzy
person Jessica
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story...Jay has to go back! Noooo....I really can\'t wait for more from this story, you have great talent and I\'m looking forward to reading more from you. Keep it up!

Jessica
person Tirch
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. You made the characters come alive. And really, it was hot :)