rate_review Reviews

I can\'t even think of the words to express how much I loved this story! I just \"found\" you last night, started this story and couldn\'t put it down-I was completely hooked. I already read one of the other two stories you have posted here and intend to read the other ASAP, but I already saw it was a short one and I want MORE! Its so hard to find a writer I really like that can come up with a great stories: interesting and with a balance of erotic & emotion, drawing you in getting you involved with the story-which you seen to have perfected from what I have read. Do you have more stories posted anywhere else? Is there more in the work? Maybe Marcus\'s story, since he played such an important role in this story, how he finds out that girlS aren\'t the answer to his happiness, but one particular girl...just an idea. Anyway thanks for the great read!

does veronica forgive him for sleeping with the other girl at the party? he broke up with her, called her names, fucked another girl, and she forgives him like that! she should have made him stress a little bit before she gave in. other than that, very nice story! the \'love scenes\' were really well written. hope there\'s a sequel or you post another story soon.

I really enjoyed this story, the whole way through. I enjoyed seeing the way you went through their growth and problems. It started off with a crush on a bestfriend and led to Jason speaking up about his love and Veronica blowing him off. And then Veronica, who had Alex at the time, gets mad at Jason for sleeping with someone else. It was really none of her business. Then it leads to Jason leaving for the military and Veronica realizing what she was losing. And then they get together but Jason has to leave again. Then Veronica is pregnant but miscarries because of Alex and Jason doesn\'t believe it. But in the end they get back together for good because, I believe, they both realize that they have done wrong in this quest for a relationship and really do love each other. I loved it. Please write another one, maybe about what happens in the future or something.

I realy like this story I think you should have Jason go to Chicago and get her back please continue with this story.

Good use of suspense in this chapter. I still don\'t think they should get back together, but I seem to be in the minority. Can\'t wait to see what you decide!

I have mixed feeling about them. Do they really deserve each other. I rememeber Veronica was a bitch to him at first, and after that he didn\'t think of letting explain herself about the baby, just assuming, not to mention shaging the woman in his old bedchamber while she could watch. But then I\'m also all for the hapily ever after part, so I wouldn\'t mind seeing them back together

whoa! thats so fuckin bogus! u have to update so soon! must get them together!

That was so sad! I hope everything gets worked out!! I wanna see them together again.

I like this story and I understand that Jason was an idiot but he loves Veronica and she loves him. So let them end up together. Can\'t wait to read what you will decide on with their relationship.

This story is really moving along nicely. As the writer, you have the power to take the relationship where you want it to go. In my humble opinion, though, I think the character of Jason has always blamed others for his mistakes, and I don\'t feel like he deserves to be with Veronica. I think she needs to get the hell away from BOTH brothers - the meglomaniac AND the immature prick. That\'s just me, though! :)