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for The Last Trumpet Sounds

by Tiel

person TalaXRei
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM

It\'s a bit boring, Spiral. Make it more lively,and I\'ll also say \'SEE YOU AT SCHOOL TOO\'! Make it more lively, okay. Cause it\'s boring! Shadow says \'HI\'!

Good story but really boring! T_T;

Love TalaXRei
person Limegreenlion
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic, the way it\'s written is different and I love that. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!