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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this story! I really want to know what happens between Christian and Alex. Oh, and one more question, is Alex pregnant? I didn\'t know if she was because the last few chapters suggested it. That\'s it. Good job on the story so far!
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I like their mom, Hayden *sp*, and Timothy can go %$?#@ ^_^ *giggle* This is a really good story. I was glad to see you\'d updated. I usually don\'t review on this site...but if it encourages you!!!!! I will!!!! Good story! *prance*
-Willow
-Willow
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May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NO! DON\'T END IT THERE! haha, guess you already did, huh? well, write more then!!! *tfootfoot impatiently* ^_^
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They got BUSTED!!!... and by their PARENTS!! LOL Anywayz... I really like where you\'re going on with this story and hope that you keep it up... I can\'t wait what\'s gonna happen next!!!
Hope you update soon ^_^
Hope you update soon ^_^
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG. Send their parents straight to hell. Please don\'t let them part my favorite couple ever. Please.
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad that this chapter made up for the last one ^_^ I can see that you haven\'t lost your touch ^^ Hmm... I read about that pregnant thingy that you wrote... why not include it in your next chappies? Just a suggestio but but I still like the current state and pace of the story... don\'t take my suggestion too seriously... it might mess up what happens next in your story hehehe...
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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! seriously, this is brilliant! you really feel what the characters are feeling
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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
JUST KEEP IT COMING!! I love the way you write. It\'s so, I don\'t know, real? Anywho, it turns me on so keep it up!
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April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WoW! I\'m glad you finally decided to update after all this time! I\'ve bee waiting for it for so long!!!
Anyway, here\'s what I gotta say... the chapter wasn\'t bad at all but then what surprised me is that Alexia looked like a different person in this chapter... I mean, it looked like her personality changed a bit... and Chris too... but everything else was GREAT! I hope you kinda get to mold the story the next time you upload a chapter...
Thank you! >.<
Anyway, here\'s what I gotta say... the chapter wasn\'t bad at all but then what surprised me is that Alexia looked like a different person in this chapter... I mean, it looked like her personality changed a bit... and Chris too... but everything else was GREAT! I hope you kinda get to mold the story the next time you upload a chapter...
Thank you! >.<
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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is really good, you use great emotion, and physical imagery :)