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for If I Had Known

by Narissah

schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It was really good over all. There were a few times through out that i felt that you rushed a bit, left out important things and didn't let the reader know about passage of time. The story over all was wonderful and very well written. I would like to read more about these two, and where life has taken them over the years.
person errr
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(reviewing extremely late. probably you won\'t read this review, but I have to say something). One word for you: B.R.I.L.L.I.A.N.T. This has to be the best original fic I\'ve read.
I swear everything was good: characters, plot, writing style,etc... wow
I have no speech (speechless).
person LadyMoon
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*eyes misted over* That was absulitly wonderfule. I love this story to death. It was fantastice. I have never read anything more betifule in my life. Please wirte anther story like it. You are now one of my all time fav aouthers. I hope you keep writing.
person Sailor Aurora
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was such a awesome story... so sad, and yet in a way I can relate to it.. espeically with the part on how other people doesn\'t seem to understand people for being different, espeically with their own paths ttheythey take.
this story totally rocks, and so do you.
person any
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, this story is really impressive!! and he listens to dir en grey! how cool is that! i really like the characters and the pace at which the story progresses, great job!!!