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for Long Night

by Michiru

person Anon
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damn that was really good. i hope you post the next installment like...tomorrow. :D pleeeeeease!
person n/a
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
o my, that was SO HOT! PLEASE continue-i can\'t wait until you post more. you are a fantastic writer-i honestly have no complaints about your story what-so-ever. It got me so hot, i hope you update REALLY soon!!! THANK YOU!
person anon
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah..long night indeed...wish i could have a night like that..lucky girl...more please
person No One Knows
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome story!! I really hope there is going to be more to it!
person Anon
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow excellent u should definetly write more
person Gurusalim
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY IS AWESOMELY AWESOME! And you mentioned that he always wanted her unwilling I believe? PLEASE!! I beg you!! In the next chapter just like...yea..use those magic fingers of yours to timulate this story along. =D