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for Long Night

by Michiru

person Cancan227
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! COME ON!
person Anon
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh god. this is so hot. write more.
person Anjel Rocker
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome!!! update soon
person Liquid Skin
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Please continue it... this is soo HOT!
person Anjel Rocker
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love that! your very good at Lemon... I read alot of lemon... write more... your amazing!!!
person reading
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
guuuuuuuuuuuuh. gaaaaaaaaaauuuuuuuuuguuuuuuuuuuahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. yes.
person Liana
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly loved your story! I really wish you would add another installment. If you would like to spice things up and add a little girl on girl action I\'d love to co-write with you, but if not your very very talented on your own.
person Rebecca
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dude, that was awesome! can you e-mail me when you update?
person ~*~
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is good so far, write more plz
person Anon
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Write some more! Plz continue this story! I am soooo jealous of the girl right now...