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June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Evil cliffhangers. *evil look*
Though, I\'m going to not yell at you, just point out that your tensing was fairly inconsistent... I like both past and present, but.. is better when is same throughout story.. *stops*
Still liking it. ^_^
Though, I\'m going to not yell at you, just point out that your tensing was fairly inconsistent... I like both past and present, but.. is better when is same throughout story.. *stops*
Still liking it. ^_^
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February 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
For a piece of fiction, it's pretty good, however for erotica, there's not murch sex.
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January 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooh...didn't realize could do this signed in... Heh. Anywas, Leezarrd! Mmm. Tasty... MORE. *nods* Can't believe how well that title did work. Good Gods. *smacks self in head* I must know you way to well.
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January 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn good despcriptions! So wonderfuly detailed! Good opening! This story really draws me in and will continue to read on! Thank you for my first review!
Cassandra *hugs* the lizard
Cassandra *hugs* the lizard