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for Alwin the Mouse

by Melrick

person ddrinki4
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whew, hot! I hope another chapter is planned. I\'ve just read all your fanfics you have up and I commned you. You aure know how to write some steamy smut. Keep up the fantastic work.
person Bennifer
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MUST..TAKE... COLD...SHOWER NOW!
I HOPE AND HOPE YOU ADD AN ADDITIONAL CHAPTER.
MAYBE SOMETHING FOR POOR OLD DAD?! HINT! ^^
person Anjel Rocker
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it was so good!!! update soon!!!
person Shampoo
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, masterpiece! Loved the whole idea, very original and clever.
And most of all--HOT & SEXY!
person loner
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE ANOTHER CHAPTER!...YOU SIMPLY CANNOT END IT LIKE THIS!...MORE MORE MORE!
person goddess
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
amazing! I LOVE YOUR STORIES....so delicious! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write a second chapter...there is just sooo much more that can be done!...sherry just cant be sated with only one time...and besides her poor daddy needs some release too *hint hint*
person Tejas
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the points of your story were right on.
hope you will continue.