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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story.It was smart,sexual and had a moral point.With Alwin over protecting Sherry.If the stranger didn't come,and something happen to Alwin would been left not knowing the real world.Unfurtunelly every one knows what happens to pretty girls when they have no where to turn.
I hope you make a second chapter.
I hope you make a second chapter.
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay - finally some porn with a touch of morality. There is a very good lesson to be learned from this one and I would hope that people that read this will come out of it with more than a stiffy or a leaking pussy. Yeah - I'm a bit crude, but that's the name of the game right? BTW - you've given me something to think about and for that I thank you.
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January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well that was quite the steamy story. I really do love fairy-tale-like stories and it was quite cute the way you 'stole' Sherry's innocence. Anyway, I liked it, and I'll definitely read more of your stories (just not at work any more, lol).
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this was the first of your stories I ever read, but I wasn't an author then, and I don't think I reviewed.
I really love this story and I wish you would write more of it. It's entirely different than anything else I've read on aff, and it was a lot of fun ot read. so keep writing, I'll defenitely keep reading!
I really love this story and I wish you would write more of it. It's entirely different than anything else I've read on aff, and it was a lot of fun ot read. so keep writing, I'll defenitely keep reading!
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My lord. I love this story so much. In fact, if it wasn\'t so explicit it would be a children\'s classic. I love all of your stories. Just... thank you for being alive, I guess.
-Pink
-Pink
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want another lesson Sam!!!XD please write more this could turn out to be better than Little Red Riding Hood!!!
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome, if you added another chapter about like Alwin and his daughter (call me daddy) that would be even cooler.
Bye
<3 Kaesi
Bye
<3 Kaesi
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would like to see more of this. I would like Alwin to fuck his daughter so he can have is release. Sherry won\'t know that a daddy/daughter relationship is wrong and she would enjoy it. ~Terra
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July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ARE THEY BOTH GOING TO FUCK HER NOW??? *sighs in ecstacy* that would be wonderful. oh, and i loved \"Red Riding Hood.\" I really like the fairy tale twist that you do. i hope you\'ll try Beauty and the Beast anyway . . . oh and maybe Goldilocks and the Three Bears . . .
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Melrick, buddy, MORE!! Daddy needs to teach his baby what it means to FUCK!