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for Let's make a slut

by FlamingFeline

person Anon
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool
person anony
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh. This is so fucking hot. You have to continue writing. This is my favorite sex story so far. It\'s so sexy and disturbing, but I love it. Update. Please I\'m dying.
person happy
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please update fuck i had a fucking orgasm while i was reading this... please do some more incest shit.....i have incest in my family and its the best please write more so i can put a dildo in my fuck hole while im reading this....GREAT STORIES
person Reaper-X
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More dog fucking....and make sure she gets fucked by a machine at full power!
person Who wants to know?
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well...i have a tip. WIRTE MORE STORIES LIKE THIS AND SOURCREAM! this was just HOT! the way all those guys and the dog did her...awesome...i'm curious...you write about these things in all your stories, but...has anything like it ever actually HAPPENED to you? because if it has...wow...just READING it is a turn-on! if it actually HAPPENED...man, i'd be in 7th heaven! i love this kind of thing...incest and smut and dogs doing people and slash...i love it all! i'm a perv, i admit it...
person Wrong
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is just wrong...how bout u dun continue it...
person yamioner990
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
have her selling herself on the streets and rented out for partys
person Damien_Azrael
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I havent the slightest how you are going to continue this story but i must say please do its really good so far.
person Damien_Azrael
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I havent the slightest how you are going to continue this story but i must say please do its really good so far.
person shura
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well I think that you should actually continue the story, it is very good!
I think you put a lot of character in your story. I have an idea on how you could continue the story and that is if you agree.
You could have her go to a strip place, her grandpa signs her up to do some dirty dancing and then you coud go on from there.

ja ne shura