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for lust

by foxfox

schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is FANTASTIC!!! I am out of words!
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story for sure. Good introduction for the story, and then we get into the whole meat of the story. Good work, you there!
person Chika
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome...you make me horny. I was skeptical at first when you said you have a man in there, but you pulled it off :)
person wes alton
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ive been reading it from the begining....its so very good please keep up the good work
person Haiku
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well written
person Indie
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! I love the way you wrote it, just getting more and more...detailed as each chapter goes on. V.Good! :-) update soon.
person zatken
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Mi\'Lady ;-D Nice to see you in a haven safe for our imaginations....

Anyway, I love the first chapter. You got me interested about the main character, how hot she is for Jessica, and what she\'s going through as a lesbian. The main character\'s experiences match with the thoughts and heartaches of my closest loved ones who are gay.

Will be reading the next chappie ;-D

Luv lots....
person zatken
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bold and hot at the same time. You make me blush ;-D

Will read next chappie ;-D
person zatken
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was hot! Ay...**still panting for breath** on to the next chappie zat
person zatken
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very very wicked ;-D