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for For Lord and Land

by galynthia

person Kia
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read the story on your website and thought it a magnificent epic. The world you paint is very vivid, with many wonderful little details that just make the story come alive. Heartbreaking and stirring, especially how you manage to make me feel for both Dante and Ardel -- one page I\'m feeling for Dante and angry at Ardel, the next chapter I\'m feeling sorry for Ardel!

Do continue to update!
person Kitty Cat
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More???? O.O?
person indigojade
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i\'m really impressed with this story... i hope that you keep working on it... it\'s a very detailed world.... beautiful and original... and good characters too... you may need a beta to help reduce some of the surface errors, but there aren\'t too many of those either... please finish it.... it would be a shame to let this world die... keep on writing!
person Tm
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I hope you keep the writting up and don\'t stop on me, I don\'t think I can take not knowing the end. Keep up the good work.