rate_review Reviews

Can you please fix chapter five? It is awfully cut...
This is so fascinating and I want to read all of it! You are so talented!
I hate not to be able to wholly enjoy a story as good as your\'s!

Oh! And chapter one as well! ...I have forgotten chapter one! T_T

this story was really great, hehe i've got to check out your site to see if there's a part two because it was so cool how they were swans lol. that was intelligent of me, huh? lol. anyway, keep up the great work~!

That was absolutely beautiful. I love all of your writings, but this has to be one of the best I\'ve read so far. I hope there\'s more soon because I\'m dying to read more. @_@;;

i loved this story. I love all fairy tales, especailly this one, and wow that version was great. I can\'t wait to see part 2

I must say that in a strange way this story reminded me of Wuthering Heig.. L.. Let me explain. If you have ever read Wutng Hng Heights, then you know that the main character, Heathcliff, is a complete and utter asshole. He went through a lot of crap, though, as a child, and you feel inclined to love him. That doesn\'t change the fact that he is an ass. Atol is another Heathcliff, my dear, and I applaud you on being able to write him so well. The story was very beautiful with a few twists that really left me wanting. I enjoyed every bit, and I\'m sorry it had to end so soon. Kudos on your artistry. I look forward to your future endevours.

~*GypsyQueen*~

I really enjoyed reading this story. as i have with all your other stories i\'ve read, wai! and there\'s stilll some i haven\'t but i shall. Thank you for creating such a beautiful piece of work.

this story was beautiful. There are no words to describe it further. I cannot even begin to think of how to explain how much I truely loved this fic. It was marverlous and truely touching. I hope in the sequel, things will turn out for the better for them--with, of course, the obligatory angst. ^_~ You are a wonderful artist and I hope to see more of this lovely creation soon.

[purrs happily] This is by far the most amazing fucking fic ever. This honestly could be made into a book and, I would sooooo buy it! The story line is perfect and everything is just....wow....I could not stop reading it. Kick ass job!

[purrs happily] This is the utmost best fic EVER! It was so beautiful and well put togther. I\'ll admit it, I cried at some points. This could honestly be made into a book, it\'s so perfect. Kick ass job.