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July 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey guys. To all who enjoyed reading this story... well, it can\'t be continued. My computer crashed not too long ago and took all of that stuff with it. However, for all you Willow and Tara fans, me and my girlfriend Sara will be posting a fan fiction soon. It\'s not exactly XXX but it is sweet in some parts, dramatic in others. Hope you\'ll read it!
Love yins, blessed be
KiWi
Love yins, blessed be
KiWi
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, or how it\'s going. The girl might have had a few more questions in my opn abn about what was going to happen to her but I\'m still enjoying it. Just a little advice though, don\'t end a chapter in the middle of a smut scene. It\'s frustrating. If you haven\'t finished enough to post wait.
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, or how it\'s going. The girl might have had a few more questions in my opinion about what was going to happen to her but I\'m still enjoying it. Just a little advice though, don\'t end a chapter in the middle of a smut scene. It\'s frustrating. If you haven\'t finished enough to post wait.
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m bored N gunna post more. I just needed to see my reviews... cos my story ain\'t in the open : /
Anywho enjoy!
Anywho enjoy!
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m bored N gunna post more. I just needed to see my reviews... cos my story ain\'t in the open : /
Anywho enjoy!
Anywho enjoy!
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I am liking your story. But did you make a survey out of it. On quizilla.com. Or did you just use the idea from it? Please e-mail me and tell me.
I am liking your story. But did you make a survey out of it. On quizilla.com. Or did you just use the idea from it? Please e-mail me and tell me.
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! =) Ahh.. maybe I\'m just a sucker for a good vampire story ^__~
Oh one thing.. your punctuation is wrong (for all the speech parts). The last punctuation should be within the quotation marks.
eg...
\"I have no family. I am an orphan, a stray if you desire\". should be -> \"I have no family. I am an orphan, a stray if you desire.\" ut kut keep up the excellent work! Looking forward to coming chapters ^^
~ichigo.
Oh one thing.. your punctuation is wrong (for all the speech parts). The last punctuation should be within the quotation marks.
eg...
\"I have no family. I am an orphan, a stray if you desire\". should be -> \"I have no family. I am an orphan, a stray if you desire.\" ut kut keep up the excellent work! Looking forward to coming chapters ^^
~ichigo.
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pretty impressive introductory chapters you wrote =) Keep up the good work! Can\'t wait for future chapters, although, you could make them slightly longer and more separated (paragraphs w/ indents, etc).
ichigo~
ichigo~
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Haunting and dark as well as seductive... I like!