rate_review Reviews

Ah! Another aboslutely fabulous chapter! Well-worth the wait ;) You know how to just keep throwing curveballs, huh? Haha I love it! Keep it up, my friend- I\'ll be waiting for the next one!

You are doing really well with your story. The emotion you describe is really good and better then the old, \'yea anyways...\' Please keep writing.

OMFG!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!1 PLEASE...OH MY JEEZ I CANNOT WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT FEW CHAPETERS....ahh...i just compltely finished reading the whole thing (up to ch 15) and i was on a natural high, i got so mellowed out and happy...sighs...i love you...and honestly saying that i got like that is an extremely big complement from me...whenever i finish a...beyond exceptional fiction or book or w/e i feel like i just.....i dunno...i cant compare it to sex cause i dunno the feeling (i\'m.....young..in comparisson so dun think me weird *nervous laugh*) it\'s like....coming down or going into a pure high that has no bad side effects...i feel so mellowed right now..hah i guess that\'s why i\'m rambling ^^;;

anyway i cannot wait to read more and i love you so much Lena for sending me this fic....(she said u two knew each other..)
gah!! Loovve!!!!!

i just read ch 8 and 9 and i have to say.....OMFG!!! THAT WAS AWESOME!!! the feeling, the way you expressed everything and the way it was wiritten IT WAS FUCKING AWESOME!! and all those emotions and turmoil and....passion with Mannix and Gavin AH!!! YOU FUCKING RULE!!............i love you o_o...

Great Chapter! I actually just emailed you. I didn\'t even noticed that GOL had been updated. I just wanted to leave a review here as well, in hopes that it may inspire you to continue to work steadily on the next chapter. Anyway...I wanted to say that I was a bit shocked that Gavin would have random sex, with a random Joe when his life is a bit crazy right now. I was a little ticked with him, but he has that effected on my anyway. Another part of your story that made me want to beat the leaving tar out of Gavin was this thought:
I knew Ren was never really interested in David, sex or otherwise, but I couldn\'t tell him that. Actually David was one of his least favorite people, Mannix\'s \"house whore\" as Ren called him on occasion. But David was just a pawn; Ren\'s knife was aimed at Mannix more than me.

What honestly does Gavin think about David? And if he knew that Ren wasn\'t interested in David, in fact hates him, why is he so upset about Ren sleeping with him?

Interesting turn of events and I look forward to the next chapter.

Redfox

i\'ve just read the 3rd chapter and the more i read the more i get the feeling that something is going to go horribly horribly wrong in that house...with that selene lady and all those vamps....a sinking suspicion that makes my stomach turn and twist....you are simply awesome ^__^
i love Gavin and David <3

Ah, I almost forgot how damn good your writing is. *sighs and stares* Yeah, that\'s all I can say, damn good. Gavin never stops to surprise me, and oh, look at Ren now! He\'s like a heartbroken schoolgirl, I swear *giggle* Well yea, I\'m kinda glad to see him suffer for screwing with Gavy and David like that... which reminds me... more Gavin/David action next time!

thi story is so sad and so good at the same time..i love ^_^
i\'m glad a friend of mine sent me the link to it..

I just loved this chapter! although it really saddened me to realize that Gavin really is just a pawn in their mind play.I really hope he realizes it soon and try to get out before it\'s too late...
and i do hope you update soon-i\'m in suspense!

I love long chapters. Especially when there hasn\'t been an update in what feels like years. Good job.