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I found your story and have been reading it. I am really enjoying it! Please write more soon.

--grabs tape, puts back in and glares at blankness--

You\'ll be the death of me yet....I wannnna see more.

I wanna know what\'s up with Mannix....

I\'m so glad you updated :) I did start wandering what\'s going on with the story...
Honestly-I\'m waiting for Gavin to realize he desrves better and decide to leave Ren,It just saddens me that not only does Ren treat him like shit but he can be a better person for Manix-those kinds of situations (when there\'s a victim in a relationship) make want to tear my hair out from the frustration ,plus I really love Gavin as a character and i hope to see him with someone else, even if I have to wait till the end of the story, though I\'m really in suspense so pretty please update sooner (I\'ll even send an email to remind you like in a few chapters before lol)
BTW thanks to you I started reading Black Widower great story!

Thanks ;)

Great chapter! and glad you\'re back to the writing. About the direction it should take...hmmmm a flash back would be good BUT

what about Mannix, where is he and how is he FEELING? .......

also what about David, whats going on with him?

Just afew suggestions, hope you update soon and don\'t leave us hanging for too long!! ;)

I absolutely adore this story and I\'ve been waiting on the edge of my seat since your last update lol. The characters are interesting and the story complex enough to keep my attention and keep me wondering whats going to happen next. I think the only complaint I have is having to wait so long between updates. I know it can be tough to make time for writing sometimes, but with months in between it means that I have to go back and recap to remember names and situations. It can become a bit tedious, ya know?

Otherwise keep up the fabulous work and I cannot wait until you update again (whenever that is ;) )

hey, i only just stumbled across this the other day and i just couldnt stop reading -- i was completely addicted. i think i over did it though as all of that in one go gives me a hell of a headache. so much is going on, pain, sadness, confusion, hurt, all attacking my brain, feeding my addiction. nothing is life is simple, everything in complex, so im glad when i find stories that take this idea into account. i cant decide who im routing for in this yet, david doesnt sit well with me as he keeps changing face but then i would be happy if he did end up with gavin, but at the same time, i wouldnt be too sad if he didnt. jon was cool though. bringing back the past to add even more thoughts to gavins troubled mind. i cant wait to find out how you continue this, i know i wont be dissapointed however it twists and turns though. the way you set out the whole thing and word the events that take place are perfect in ever way and draws me right into the whole plot, its amazing.

also, i have never really read any original stories before, only fanfic, but im so glad i read this, and now it has shown me how i can love original characters just as much as already known characters, so i will venture more into this category. point here is, thanks for opening my eyes to something new. n_n

as a side note, there is an advert on aff.net that i can see while im writing this review, for juxtaposefantasy.com and has a pic of a guy called hadrian. in my mind he is exactly how i picture gavin even though i\'ve only just come across this image and i have seen gavin like this in my mind all alone. anyways, enought rambling from me, will be waiting for more from you :)

Keeeep going pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaassssssssseeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Loved the chappie and great as always!!!

Thanks for the new chapter. I enjoyed. Do more :)

where\'s the next chapter!

is there going to be a future for gavin and david? oh please say there is! i feel so sorry for them both, let them be together in the end david can show gavin how love is supposed to be.

update soon good work!

darkangel1210