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This story is addictive. Please write more. :) I must know what happens to Gavin!

Wow, I really like this story. I like the plot and I absoluty love this kid.

I have NEVER EVER hated and loved so many characters in my LIFE!! I just sat here and read all 17 chapters in one sitting...and I'm all angry and mushy at once! I ADORE Gavin, and love/hate Ren...can't stand Mannix, but at the same time love his additude, am annoyed with David yet find him intriguing...oh for pete's sake..>UPDATE!!!

Wonderful story. I am really enjoying it. I don't usually read the original fiction. I am a LOTR fan, but I am glad I discovered your story. The characters are very interesting.
Jaylen

Very nice! All right I lie...Ren's being such an ASS..Poor Gavin, my heart goes out to him!

Poor Gavin poo ;_; i feel so bad for him. That was a really quick update, can\'t wait for the next one. And i\'m glad Mannix and David will be getting their turn soon.

Ooooooh a new face huh? Sounds interesting!!

Still loving it, well worth waiting for.

*sniffs* Poor Gavin..
I hate Ren!!
Please update soon :)

I\'m loving this, i really am. And i have so many guesses on whats going on but ......anyway, will we be seeing david soon? I\'m so hung up on that couple, it kinda looks like it\'ll never happen but one can hope right? This fic has so much potential, so much innner conflic, drama...ngst, so much foreshadowings, so much everything, it\'s a really great fic. Mind blowing-it can be taken literally. I\'m so confused but i\'m enjoying this and i hope the wait won\'t be too long seeing as your having trouble with the direction it should head in, can\'t blame you, i\'m having problem figuring it out. your plot and the way you put everything together is quite captivating and your writting style is phenomenal. The characters are written to perfection, and even through the drama you have me cracking up here. Gavin\'s persona touches your heart, captures your attention and holds it. Can\'t wait for more.