rate_review Reviews

Hoi! I majorly enjoyed the story thus far! I also liked this subchapter. I really don't now though what to think about Ren's "love". I mean would you prostitute the one you love? Or beat? .. But maybe he really loves Gavin.. in his strange sort of way. I'd like to know if he feels sorry that he forces him to prostiution... I mean wouldn't you want your loved one to be untouched by others? I would really love to see another "falsh-back-chapter" where Ren assigns Gavin the first time to a 'job'. I mean how did it come to this, and how did Gavin react? Did he agree with it at once or hat Ran force him into it.
Would Ran feel guilty if one of Gavins 'customers' would lose contrand and get a bit overzealous with him?`
Gahhh so many questions^_^ I'm quite a bit intrigued with their strange relationship... I'm wondering how it will work our.. will Ran change or will Gaving get the strenght to leave Rans strong hold...

Please continue and.. update soon ;p

*chu* BR

gold! It is gold! all of it! please, post more soon! flashbacks, present day, anything! I love it all!

Wow, this is good & your writing gets better and better as the chapters continue-- I'm impressed, I like the whole vamps & warewolves thing, adds a touch of the exotic to a slash story, and I wonder how it's going to tie in later, and one wonders about David-- I can't help but think he has some vampire in him-- hmmm-- just to add a bit of angst. You should be proud of this & now off to see what else you've done.

-A

please continue, please...
must.......have....more....Gavin!!!!
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVED it. It had a real dark, underground-ish sort of feel to it, and I dig that a lot. The vamp/werewolf thing was very imaginative and creepy (in a good way!). Keep up the good writing! I'll have my eye on this story!

Why do i get the feeling Ren is just trying to butter him up? Maybe he has some vamps who saw him at the party and he knows Gavin will freak out... hm.., And it\'s pretty obvious that Gavin\'s services are REALLY expensive. Oh! Ren is SUCH a bastard!!! Gah!

OMG!!!!!!! eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee *claps furiously* !!!!!!!!! EEP i love you! :D

can I just say one thing? YOU ARE GOD! I love this story to death, it has everything that I love all in one story. please keep it up, I check for up dates every day. I live to read your story. I think you could start a fan club for it and charge membership fees, you would make a fortune off of me and the many people I have guided to this work of art.
-susan

can I just say one thing? YOU ARE GOD! I love this story to death, it has everything that I love all in one story. please keep it up, I check for up dates every day. I live to read your story. I think you could start a fan club for it and charge membership fees, you would make a fortune off of me and the many people I have guided to this work of art.
-susan

I really love this story! It\'s quite an interesting world you\'ve got there ^_^ I\'m VERY curious as to how the whole \'vampire\' thing works in this universe. As for the memories of Ren and whatnot, maybe if you wrote a prequel AFTER you finished this story... It\'s not that I don\'t want to know what happened (believe me, I do), it\'s just that I want to know what\'s GOING to happen MORE... if you know what i mean. Anyway, I\'ve been looking out for this story for a while now. I\'m glad you didn\'t drop it. But I hope you\'re ok... why were you in the hospital? Feel better soon!