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October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey! im so glad u updated, fainlly! that wotalotally awesome! ur movin ur stories? can u post ur website so i can read them there? that would be great! cant wait to read mroe!
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Real life is such that I don't usually have time to read more than certain fics within certain fandoms. But, I was looking around and decided to try the originals. The summary fors sts story caught my eye and I started reading your fic, enjoying it in one sitting. That's actually quite a feat considering I'm the world's slowest reader. But, it just goes to say how much I have enjoyed reading the story so far. I look forward to your updates. Good job!
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September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Like i said before I love your story and i'm really happy you update so soon not many writers do
Poor Gavin the whole night... and who are Claude and Saldo?
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Dana.
Poor Gavin the whole night... and who are Claude and Saldo?
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Dana.
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wah! Great story!!! But such an evil cliffhanger!!!!!!!!!! >______< please continue soon!!! *desperate look*
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September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you make me so happy. please keep writing. I love the sad flashbacks, but I am looking forward to the rest of the story. Will we get a flashback of when Ren makes Gavin take Bliss? That sounded quite interesting. Keep up the good work (not that I need to be telling that to a god, but what the heck).
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gaaaaaaaaah! Ren is such an asshole!!!!! Poor poor Gavin! I hope he can flee from that hell and become happy elsewere. Please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >_<
MH
MH
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September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey! wow!! i love this story! its soo good! that was an amzin chapter!! it was nice and long; i hope u update soon because i cant wait to read more!!!
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September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whaaaa~~~h! *sobs*
Yes plesase, put in some present please. T_T This last part was so sad... One thing is when iot´s already like that, but reading about the change is so so sad. I´m glad you put it up it´s good to have views into the past to understand better the characters. But it´s so sad... now I´m piunning for some present story... at least there there is some hopes of something good happening to Gavin. Maybe after you can do some more flashbacks?
Yes plesase, put in some present please. T_T This last part was so sad... One thing is when iot´s already like that, but reading about the change is so so sad. I´m glad you put it up it´s good to have views into the past to understand better the characters. But it´s so sad... now I´m piunning for some present story... at least there there is some hopes of something good happening to Gavin. Maybe after you can do some more flashbacks?
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September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Gavin, he's so easy to abuse. Makes for a great story, though. Can'it tit to read more of it.
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September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yike, I realized I never reviewed this fic and givt itt its due on AFF.net so here it is. What I love about this story is that the characters are multi-dimensional, there are so many layers that it's impossible to guess what's coming next. There's nothing predictable about GOL and each plot twist hooks you until the next one. I'm waiting patiently *taps foot, lol* until the next part.