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Finally, an update! Ah it was good, alright... but me wants Gavin/David action! Woot! Ahem, anyways, I still think that Ren's a SOB and needs to get what he deserves *shakes fists* I really look forward to seeing your site. If you need any help or anything art/proofing/etc you know where to find me^^;; Chao!

Wow this changes alot of things and i assume we'll be seing a lot more of Manix aren't we
i can't wait to see what happens once Gavin comes home.

please keep writing i'm in love with this.it's been so good and i want more soon ,please.

I believe that I've been a bad loyal reader, following this t fro from the beginning (even though sometimes it's a long wait) and not once reviewing. Well, here's a review for you. I love the whole damned thing - the plot, the characters (but Gavin's definitely my favorite with...Mannix oddly enough a distant second), the sex. It's all good and I don't mind the wait because it's always well worth it.

On a more chapter-specific note, shower scenes are always good and I'm enjoying Gavin's confusion as to why he enjoys being sadistic.

CP

Oh my god, that was intensly good, i just sat down and read all nine chapters at once... woah. I was just overwhelmed by that. Really dark, i don't get the chance to read things that dark very much. I loved it. All the fantasy elements seem s o natural and real, not at all how they ussually come off. You have a real talent for making everything feel real. It all melded together in an absolutely fantastic way. The characters are so perfectly formed anve sve such depth to them, you bring out so many suprises and things that at first seemed odd now make sense through the character development. I absolutely fell in love with this story, (which unfortunatly is all to rare for me) and hope to read more chapters to come.
-Excentricity

I love this fic moe then I have ever loved before :D that was the best chapter ever, I can't wait for the next one!

damn!!!!!!! I just fucking love this story!!!!!!!!!!! It gets better with every chapter! At first I thought David was a poor victim... but now I'm not so sure anymore.. is he too a prostitute, like Gavin? What is behind that gentle mask? Will there be "real love" for Gavin, or just another farce?........ XD Pleassssssssse keep on writing it!!!!

PS: have you got a notification ML for new chapters? If there is one I'd love to subscribe!!!!!!!! I'm very much looking forward to that website!!!! ;)

*glare* Don't you even think about stopping posting it here! it's too good not to read, so yea... Love it, need more!

Wow, this is simply amazing work. I love yflowflow of words and grip over the characters. You've fleshed them out so well.

I loved this chapter I can't wait for the next one
What will you webpage's adress be?