rate_review Reviews

*feeds lemons to your plot bunny* Heya, it was such a great chapter! I\'ve been waiting for some kinky Gavin/David action for a while, and hell, I can\'t say it wasn\'t worth it. They\'re too cute together ~_~ I\'m looking forward to the next update. The stuff on yer site was neat, too. Loved the poems^^ Take care. Lena.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They\'re so cute!!!!!!!!!! ^^ I just love them!!!!!!!
OK, I\'m back to normal... I think... well, really great chapter, really really really GREAT chapter, I love those two, and David is one delicious mistery, grrrrrrrrr!!!!!! I love that man, he is hot... and nice at the same time. Grab him Gavin sweetie, men like him are very rare. Well Peccavi, it\'s official you\'re my favorite original fic writer, this story is so good, book material, really... kind a naughty ^_^ bud book material after all. Your characters are so good, and real, and they expand and gorw even more with every passing chapter. Don\'t keep me waiting to long please, i\'m addicted to your story.

Bye, kisses from Perú.

Lorien Lupin

P.S. Sorry for the short review, I don\'t have much time.

Aaaaghhhhh!
*sobs* Finally some David... T_T I hope you can find some more time to type the rest of the chapter soon.
I´ve been waiting for more David so much. XDDDD Now it´s hard to wait. :)

I thought the first half of chapter 12 would be enough, but it only made me what more... I love this one even more than the last.

Wow, I have to say I have NEVER read anything like this before. You know what I really enjoy about this? There\'s pure sex in every chapter, but yet you still manage to create a plot! Genius I tell you! I feel so sorry for Gavin, he\'s so incredibly blind to the fact that everyone uses him. Poor guy. I hope David can love him and teach him what it\'s really supposed to be all about. Make this lust story a love story soon please! I\'m a sucker for romance. Gavin\'s so sweet! I love him really I do!

Mmm, another breathtaking chapter *purr* I like Ren even less now, if that\'s possible. Can\'t wait to read part 2^^ Oh yea, I wanna see Ian in it, too! He\'s such a cutie *steals Ian and Gavin and David and runs off* x_X too...heavy...bishis More soon, mou!

I\'m still obsessed with this fic. It\'s on my recommended reading list, I believe, if that says how much I really like it. This chapter was good, I\'m a sucker for internal conflict, and dividing it into two parts seems like the good thing to do.

CP who now has an original angst fic up at this site

i love your story. i cant wait for the next part of chap 12. ^^ its a great story

wow you reviewed my story, thanks! really I\'ve read this story before and loved it so I was thrilled to see you liked one of mine...any way, sorry for not reviewing your fic sooner...it\'s great, I love Gavin and hope you countinue this story

Oh I hope you\'ll post the second part soon!!
I would love everything you\'ll do with GOL, besides, the plot itself is more important to me than the smut because This story is much more than that. I really love it!!