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I\'m so impressed with the intensity of your writing!

Gavin is a terrific character and I look forward to more of his story.

Your portrayal of Jean-Claude in your AB:VH fic is wonderful, what a great scene!

Thanks and keep writing!

I love you. Marry me.

Hey, I was wondering; what music was listed throughout the story? I downloaded Judith (from ch.1) and I loved it, but I scanned the entire story quickly and didn\'t see that other song or two you listed...which songs were they? I love this style and totally didn\'t expect to...

Excellent fic. I especially like the realism with which you write the main characters; that they aren\'t just \'damsels\' in need of a rescuing. Very nice job, and smashing dialogue. Looking forward to an update soon!

This is probably in the top 5 of the best stories I\'ve ever read (this includes published, professionally-written novels). I seriously think you have amazing talent, please please PLEASE make an attempt to get this published! I love reading it, and can\'t drag myself from the computer when I start :P Amazing stuff, dude! I love you!!!!

i come from a far away land called The Nocturne. i am a slave to Janette\'s creative brain. i come in peace ....& very willing. ^_~

MOOOOOORRRRREEE!! i\'ve got Ren pegged, he\'s a greedy, manipulative bastard. i\'ve got Gavin down too (obviously) [he\'ll be a better player than Ren when he snaps out of this, & MAYBE not so much of an ass]. i think i\'ve pretty much figured David out. *shakes head in disgust of pathetic, romantic idiots*
but i CAN\'T seem to put my foot down on Mannix!! & he\'s the one i came to see!! (keep up the awesome work with Janette btw! ^_^) he\'s so freakin WEIRD! 0.o i get that he\'s masochisitic...so maybe it\'s just that he likes Gav so much, who has got himself shut away from dominating behavior for ...\"safety\" reasons, but then what\'s up with Manny & David? ...i wish i could get a better view of them together. THEN i could figure them out... *sly smile*

UPDATE!! >o<

Will those two just get together already? How long do I have to wait! They are obviouslly meant to be together. I think the only way for Gavin to realize that is if David does something for him (romantic!) It\'s so strange how I\'m addicted to your story! LOL

aww that was actually kinda cute

Aaaah Finally together. :( But poor Gavin is so fucked up... he can´t even deal well with this T_T. *huggs Gavin and pats David*

David makes a return, yippee! *Cheers all happy-like before she remembers that she\'s a fan of Mannix, then stops.* Well, the plot is certainly getting really nice and complicated, but I\'m loving every bit of this fic. Maybe I\'ll write an original one day. Wait, I\'m actually working on the backstory behind chars, so it won\'t be long because I have something original up.

The sex was nice, the emotions in this story are VERY real, and I\'m happy every time I see it updated.

CP the procrastinating