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I love gravity and i love silent screams...Can\'t wait for more silent scream

Yes, yes they need to make up and be happeh ~_~ Like I said, I think Ren\'s losing his ground. Hope he gets what he deserves *mumbles and waits for an update*

Boy, that was AWESOM!!!!! I love David, he\'s SO mysterious ^.^ wrap him and send him to me for Christmas, even mad he is sexy. Poor Gavin, all his good mood it\'s gone, and now he has to face Ren. I knew that Ren was being too nice U he was planning evil things. Gavin should knew that Ren was going to do something to make him paid for the whole Mannix situation; and now he has make David and Gavin mad at each other, poor babies. So, the idea of David fucking Ren troubles Gavin; I wonder if that is because of Ren, or because of David, I vote for David. About David having troubles with the Mannix/Gavin situation, I\'m not sure if that bothers him because of Gavin or because of Mannix, that guy keeps getting weirder and weirder with every passing chapter... and I LOVE that.
Well, that’s it; I\'m on my way now because it\'s 3:20 am. Just one more thing: HURRY, PLEASE, HURRY!!!!! But no pressure ^_^U.
Bye, kisses from Perú.

Lorien Lupin

P.D. By the way, I\'m reading your Mannix/Ren fic, the one on your web site; and I love it; it\'s great, I like young Mannix almost as much as David ^.^U. Oh, yeah, and the Poemtrack, it\'s awesom, I think that \"what I had\" (or have, I don\'t remember) and \"Masks\" are about David, are they? Well, keep the great job, your definitely my favorite fic writer. Bye.

Yay! you\'re back!
That David has some nerve! i mean i\'ve always liked him but he had no right to talk to Gavin like that. he better apologize to Gavin or he doesn\'t deserve him! I have to say i was quite surprised at David\'s behavior and Ren just had to be behind this! he and Mannix are in one word-monsters!
Poor Gavin... i just want him to be happy.
Please write fast :-)

*Glomps* You updated!! About damn time, too. LOL. Well, I loved the chapter, though I kinda wish you went into more detail with the Gavin/David action at the beginning. Reading good fics helps me forget that my jaw is throbbing from the pain of having a tooth removed Wednesday. The plot is moving along nicely and I can\'t wait to see what you\'ve got in store for us next time.

CP the achy

that was EXACTLY what THIS GavxDave fan wanted. ^_^ Something had to give -& now they\'re on even footing. AND Gavin\'s almost got his head on straight........ALMOST.

now i\'m just waiting for him to punch Ren back. ^_~ (not very likely huh?)
as for mannix......*looks around* where did Angelo get to?.......

i\'m so glad you updated good chapter please update soon.

Oh wonderful! I was sooo happy to see and update! You took too long --pouts-- But I can forgive you since you put up sucha wonderful chappie!

Can\'t wait to read the next one and I hope that it\'s not tooooo long in coming!

Apollo

What a fantastic story. I love the characters and how you are letting the story unfold. I\'ve only recently discovered \"original\" fics and haven\'t been disappointed yet. Keep up the good work. Cant\' wait for chapter 13!!

Wow. What can I say? Wow. I just read the first 12/13 chapters in one sitting and I\'m reduced to...wow.

This is an absolutely amazing story. I love how you capture the internal conflicts of Gavin. He\'s a really well thought out and developed character. A lot of the stories here are just an excuse for smut, but this has a wonderful storyline. I can\'t wait to see the next update!!

**Zephyr**