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for Sunshine and Shadow

by Jen

person Rocky Valkyrie
schedule March 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story... very... interesting. Please continue. It\'s sexual, but doesn\'t have to be to be good. I like that. Go on with it.
person James Hawking
schedule March 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More More Give me more
person Sasami
schedule March 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That\'s so sad... *sniffles at entire story*...
Now where\'s the rest? I reviewed! See this review thingie... now I want another chapter before the end of spring break.. k? Right then...
Very good by the way.
~Sami
person malaya
schedule March 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
eye brows furrowed. want to hurt the queen - how will Shi and Lyn escape?
person April
schedule March 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So short and bittersweet. I didn\'t realize the 8th chapter was up until just now. Aw, I hope you do write more despite all the bakas who read this and don\'t bother to review. *shakes head* It\'s shameful.
person Anon
schedule February 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like it; keep it up
person Lizard
schedule February 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, but I thought that there would be more pain involved with it. Or is that suppose to come in the next chapter? Me want more, and I don't care if I am reviewing again. ^_^
person April
schedule January 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooo very good so far and it's going to be yuri. *hugs Jen-sama* :]
person A Liz
schedule January 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great so far, but needs longer chapters. *nodnod* Feel bad for Shi, but oh well. Such is life.