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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! the feelings of sympathy you create here is incredible. I felt sympathy, disgust and naturally quite a bit aroused. Excellent so far hope to see more of it soon :)
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know this is an old story, but awesome writing! I wonder if it will ever be finished...
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! I\'m dying because you have\'t written more. i was a lil bit confused in chapter seven when Lyn\'ia tried to catch her own tears and was laughing and all... i dunno... i got lost. I love your character development and i wanna see what is going on with Shi\'Ri\'An. Come on, come on post more! It\'s been years... you\'re killin me...
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice story. A shame it hasn\'t been updated in a while. ^^ Like the characters quite a lot, and I\'d like to know more about this queen.
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December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work! I feel so sorry for your characters...They are very well developed. This is, without a doubt, the best fic I have ever read!
Please post more soon!
Please post more soon!
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^.^ very good story. Tho I am a big Elf lover and I hate the Queen. >=\\ bitch. ^.^ even tho its kinda a long shot i wish they could both get away. =P now.... your a very good writer and i wish you would continue with your story.
from me
Amb
P.S. yah yah I know im the latest review =P but i JUST now read the story.
i feel like a big idiot, bein like a year off from everyone else.
well anyways... like i said ^.^ good story
from me
Amb
P.S. yah yah I know im the latest review =P but i JUST now read the story.
i feel like a big idiot, bein like a year off from everyone else.
well anyways... like i said ^.^ good story
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October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your writing style is truly poetic. One can actually see the images take place as your words flow. You do not merely say what happens, you illustrate it with a prose that is uncommon to most authors.
The story is wonderfully, beautifully sad. Hopefully more is on the way?
~Lady Moria
The story is wonderfully, beautifully sad. Hopefully more is on the way?
~Lady Moria
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July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well I have reviewed two of your other stories and I must say this is my favorite. Its so beauitful and sad.... The way you portray elves is great! update soon!!! update soon!!! update soon!!!!!!!
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July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Really great story! I wish there was more! Very rarely does one find actualy talent in places like this, but I think you have it! Please, keep up the good work! More chapters! MOREMOREMORE!
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April 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dear Lynn, Beautiful written fic, makes me feel like I\'m there. Great descriptions of people, lots of emotion. But where\'s the sex, dammit?!
I\'ve read through 7 and a half chapters and have hardly got a tingle cos of the lack of actual sexual contact. You\'re a tease!
B T
I\'ve read through 7 and a half chapters and have hardly got a tingle cos of the lack of actual sexual contact. You\'re a tease!
B T