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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is GREAT. Absolutely fucking awesome. The plot is keeping me interested, and the smut is... whoa. Yeah.
You do have a few grammatical and typographical errors, and if they were fixed, this story would go from \'great\' to \'perfect\'. I suggest you invest in a beta-reader. As busy as (fu (full time student and working two part time jobs), I\'ll volunteer for the task if you don\'t find anyone else to be your beta.
Thanks for writing, keep up the amazing work, and contact me if you\'d like me to do some proofreading. ^_^
-Penn
You do have a few grammatical and typographical errors, and if they were fixed, this story would go from \'great\' to \'perfect\'. I suggest you invest in a beta-reader. As busy as (fu (full time student and working two part time jobs), I\'ll volunteer for the task if you don\'t find anyone else to be your beta.
Thanks for writing, keep up the amazing work, and contact me if you\'d like me to do some proofreading. ^_^
-Penn
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice storyline its interseting and er Rem Reminds me of Ann Rice
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY like your fic. Whatever happened to Donella\'s friend at the club? Just curious.
Dominic is one nifty (yes, I said nifty) vamp. Right sexy, that one.
Write more soon please.
Dominic is one nifty (yes, I said nifty) vamp. Right sexy, that one.
Write more soon please.
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
loved this story...the ending was not what I expected...make me want to trade places with her...