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for At the Fetish Parasite

by iluvmybaronie

person Sweet Sorrow
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy crapness!!! This is HOT! HOT! HOT!!
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HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT!!!!
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So much sex.
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HOT HOT HOT!!
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EEK!! SO FUCKING HOT!
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Update please?? PLEASE?? PLEASE??? (I like Dominic .. let him have sex with Donella just once more?)
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~SS~
person Sweet Sorrow
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS SO AWESOME!! SEX SEX!! SO MUCH SEX!!
LOL
THis is awesome! Please update! I can\'t wait for more!!
^___^
You have a knack for writing, lady. Keep up the good work.

~SS~
person Sweet Sorrow
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS SO AWESOME!! SEX SEX!! SO MUCH SEX!!
LOL
THis is awesome! Please update! I can\'t wait for more!!
^___^
You have a knack for writing, lady. Keep up the good work.

~SS~
person Nekogirl
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOoooo. Looks like it\'s getting more and more complex! I like it! Please update soon!
person tinytim10
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you should have more than 9 reviews for such a good story! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO DONELLA! did she really die?! or did Dominic let her live, cuz he had the flashes of her life in front of his eyes?! and can\'t he read her mind to find out the truth?! hmmm i\'m so confused but please update soon!
person SubmissiveOne
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been following your story for a while, and now that you\'ve hit the double digits in chapters, I wanted to tell you how much I\'ve enjoyed it...you have a talent for writing, and this is a good story, with a very nice p..cu..curious what\'s going to happen next...

Have one small problem though...you wrote: “We have reached our verdict, and you are sentenced to die,” Nigel told me heavily, “Do you have anything to say?” near the end of your story...I assume/hope that you meant Dominic there, right?
person Islandgyal2004
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love your story keep up the good work
person deblovesdragon
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am starting to think that Donella might become a future leader of a vampire coven like Dominic and Lethian are. She seems to be a natural leader and moral as far as vampires go.
I look forward to your next chapter(s).
person jadephoenix
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
even Prince Charles taking it up the arse by Margaret Thatcher in a strap-on.

^^^

that was A) a VERY nasty visual

B) funny enough to get me wn own out of the computer lab.
person joe joe
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was kool. PLZ make more soon